So here's some advice on describing skin colors :)
- Avoid too long descriptions like dark goldenrod, cracked and wrinkled skin. That's just a bit too much.
- If you describe skin tones other than white, then you should describe white skin too. Otherwise It'll be weird. Here's some examples:
Chalk
Ivory
Snowy
Pale
White
Pink
Light
- Food related descriptions... No, no, no. I mean, yeah, some may be ok, but don't use food in your descriptions too often (otherwise your reader will get hungry).
- Try to be different and unique, but don't use words that the average reader won't understand.
- Also show facial features and go deeper. Don't just say "He was Asian". That's boring! (Even though it might work the best in some cases. It's your story, who am I to tell you how to write?)
And remember that only telling the skin tone still leaves out a lot. Make sure to also show eye color, hair color and style and even describe the face or body.
Further reading:
http://writingwithcolor.tumblr.com/
http://caithyra.tumblr.com/
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