6/27/16

'Walk' synonyms

My critique partners have said to me many times that I use the word 'walk' way too much, which I totally agree with. And that's why I decided to create this list. I hope you find this helpful :)

Happy writing!!


  1. Limp: walk unsteadily because of injury, especially favoring one leg; see also falter
  2. Pound: see lumber
  3. Lumber: walk slowly and heavily
  4. Roam: see ramble
  5. Ramble: walk or travel aimlessly (also, talk or write aimlessly, or grow wildly)
  6. Sashay: see parade
  7. Saunter: to walk about easily
  8. Scuff: to walk without lifting one’s feet
  9. Shamble: see scuff
  10. Shuffle: see scuff (also, mix, move around, or rearrange)
  11. Prance: walk joyfully, as if dancing or skipping
  12. Stagger: walk unsteadily (also, confuse or hesitate, or shake)
  13. Lurch: walk slowly but with sudden movements, or furtively
  14. March: walk rhythmically alone or in a group according to a specified procedure
  15. Mince: walk delicately
  16. Mosey: walk easily and/or aimlessly
  17. Pace: walk precisely to mark off a distance, or walk intently or nervously, especially back and forth
  18. Amble: walk easily and/or aimlessly
  19. Bounce: walk energetically
  20. Clump: walk heavily and/or clumsily
  21. Falter: walk unsteadily
  22. Traverse: walk across or over a distance
  23. Footslog: walk through mud
  24. Gimp: walk unsteadily because of injury, especially favoring one leg
  25. Trample: walk so as to crush something underfoot
  26. Plod: walk slowly and heavily, as if reluctant or weary
  27. Hobble: walk unsteadily or with difficulty; see also limp
  28. Trot: walk briskly or lightly, see nip
  29. Nip: walk briskly or lightly, eg. brief walk to a certain destination, as if on an errand
  30. Swagger: walk with aggressive self-confidence
  31. Tiptoe: walk carefully on the toes or on the balls of the foot, as if in stealth
  32. Troop: walk in unison, or collectively

6/8/16

5 rules to writing unforgettable characters that breathe on the page

Hi!

Someone asked me to write about how to create realistic and likeable characters, and since I struggle a little bit with this myself, I went on a journey to find the best articles on it. So... I didn't get any sleep last night either... But now I know how to write an awesome character. Win!

Here are some "rules", and at the end of this post are five links to the articles I read.




Rule nr. 1: All of your characters must change

In real life, people don't change that much, but in fiction, they have to. It's just unrealistic if they don't. Crazy, right? So, the theory is this:

  • In the beginning of your story, let's say your protagonist hates magic. 
  • Then something happens to her that forces her to use magic.
  • In the end, she realizes that magic is a good thing if you use it the right way, and uses her magic to fight off the bad guys. Happy ever after.
 or

  • Your protagonist is really sad because their life sucks.
  • Something happens that makes their life even worse.
  • They learn that they have to stay strong and not be miserable because life will suck anyways. The end.
 (That was a pretty depressing example, but you get the point.) Your characters have to change in some way. It doesn't even be very drastic, but it has to make sense and be realistic. The characters have to have reason to change.


Rule nr. 2: Know your characters

If you don't know your characters better than yourself, then how are you going to write an entire book about them? The secret here is to write down as much as you think you need to know about them and then put it on the wall next to your writing desk or in a story bible. But don't ever make the mistake of info-dumping! Your readers don't need to know everything about the characters. When we talk about world building, we are often advised to know as much as we can about the world, but only spill the most important information to the reader, and that way, they'll automatically know that there's much we aren't telling them. And that same advice goes for characters too.

Character questionnaires are perfect for this. One is in the links below, but there's also plenty of them everywhere on the internet :)


Rule nr. 3: Listen to peoples' conversations

If you travel to school or work by bus, leave your phone in you pocket and your earphones at home. Dialogue is an enormous part of who we are, and its importance is unfortunately often underestimated. To be able to write good dialogue, you have to listen to people and also read a lot of dialogue in books. If you're an introvert, just watch a movie and make notes of how people speak and what their choice of words tell about them.

A big part of our personalities can be seen in the way we speak, so take your time to figure out how your character's voices stand out from each other.


Rule nr. 4: Study body language

There are great scientific articles online, and also a lot of helpful charts on how to write natural body language, so I won't write much about it. It's just as -- if not even more -- important as dialogue. Body language is what people say with their actions. Body language is extremely important when you for example want to show someone lying. Do your research!


Rule nr. 5: Don't neglect your secondary characters or villain

This is hard, because you don't want your secondary characters or your villain to be more fleshed out or more likeable than your protagonist, right?

No, no, no. No.

You have to flesh out all of your characters. It may be the protagonist and villain who make all the big decisions, but unless the reader cares about your supporting characters too, then why are they there? I hate it (and I know I'm not alone) when secondary characters are clearly only there to entertain or advise the protagonist. They need to have lives of their own too -- back stories, preferences, favorite foods, own voices -- or your story will be boring and flat.


I hope these "rules" (=tips) helped you. I'll see you again soon!

  1. http://www.novel-writing-help.com/character-change.html
  2. http://www.writersdigest.com/writing-articles/by-writing-goal/improve-my-writing/he-said-she-said
  3. http://www.writersdigest.com/editor-blogs/guide-to-literary-agents/the-9-ingredients-of-character-development
  4. http://www.liferichpublishing.com/AuthorResources/Fiction/Five-Traps-and-Tips-for-Character-Development.aspx
  5. https://www.writingclasses.com/toolbox/character-questionnaire/proust 

Please tell me if you know any websites that I haven't listed so that I can add them in :)

Happy writing!
Em

6/6/16

New website

Hello!

I had a website in 2014-2015 but deleted it last summer because I felt like I wanted to change my pen name to something cooler. But I never made a new one when I decided to use E. M. Redshaw as my author name, and last night I decided to change that. So I stayed up extremely late with our horrible internet connection and made this.

I'm pretty proud of it, so you should definitely check it out and tell me what's good and what I should improve. I know I'm not super active on the blog, but I'll try to keep the website up to date and at least remember to change my age in my bio when I turn eighteen xD

The website is just for people who are interested in me and my work and want a small peek into my personality and writing style. But the blog will be the place where I share my deep thoughts and feelings about random things, with no boundaries or stuff like that. So don't worry, the website won't affect the contents here at all.

Don't forget to go to wattpad and read  the new part three of Poisoned Fire and check out my new website :)

Happy reading and writing!
Em

6/5/16

Broken pot art (cute little fairy garden diy)

 

Hi guys!

I've been really craftsy lately, I don't know why. Maybe it's because summer vacation just started and I finally have time to do the things I otherwise wouldn't. Wow, that's so sad. School sucks. (But you know, education is the greatest weapon you can have, and I want to be a warrior. So I guess the pain and stress is worth it..)

Aaanyways, I made a fairy garden into a broken pot today. And here's how YOU can do it too!

Yay!

First you have to break a clay pot or find a broken one that's been laying around for some time. We didn't have any pots that were broken in the "right" way, so I grabbed the hammer and screwdriver! I moisted the pot because I read somewhere that you have to do that before trying to cut it, but I don't know if that actually helped or not...


You may have to do this many times if you don't get the desired shape in the first try. When you have pot that looks like it could be filled and doesn't lay scattered all over your yard because you hit it a little too hard with the hammer (BE SUPER CAREFUL), you can pour in some sand or some kind of soil and plants. What I also did was silicone mushrooms. There's a really good video on youtube. Click here to see it. I just did what the guy on the video does but without the lights. It's so simple and so cute!

I hope this was fun to read! Comment and share if you want more posts like this :)

I'll see you again soon!